There's love inside,
That I hold for you,
Though I can't catch your sight,
But the moments when i don't think about you are few...
I have cried my eyes out,
But it's you that I thin about,
I wonder if I could have said it loud,
And not made myself alone in the crowd...
The gleam of my eyes has gone,
Everything seems to go wrong,
But there's still a silver lining in the dark clouds that I see,
That one day you will miss not only me...
But also my sorrows, my laughter, my gee...
The world will change,
The times won't be the same,
And feelings you can never cage,
One day all barriers will be lame...
Yeah... One day all barriers will be lame...!!
16 comments:
hey dis one is marvellous..
pyar ki hawa bheeeeee reli hai................
panchi bhi ud rele hai..........
cow bhi grass chaba reli hai...............
kya poem hai even i can get a booker.........
lol...........
nice yaar........
jez joking............
hey thankz for this xtra-ordinary boletoh itna hatke compliment k liye thankzz....[:)]
TRUE LOVE...THIS IS WHAT CAME IN MY MIND WHEN I READ UR BLOG.THE BLOGGER IS REALLY A VERY ROMANTIC PERSON AND UNDERSTANDS THE DEPTH OF A RELATIONSHIP.TRUELY ROMANTIC...PURE AND SPECIAL!!!MAKES YOU WANT TO FALL IN LOVE.THIS IS REALLY VERY TOUCHY.....GREAT WORK AKANCHCHA.....
thank you piyush, this is indeed a special comment.. n has really touched me and made me feel that even without a bf i had been quite successful in knowing a bit bout love n xpressing it...
but yea... yaar mere naam ki spelling toh yaad rakh leta
ohoooo i am really sorry!!!!
yaar akku bola karun tujhe to it will be better na??
hmmm... chalega at least mera naam bigadne se toh kafi achha option hai
hmmmmmmmmm........nanananana kehte kehte...haan haan kehna seekh liye......ishq mein bina pade hein........uski gehraee naapna seekh gaye......
hmmmmmm.... ha-na ha-na ke beech he gehrayi ko naap gaye.... fir raasta jaannne ke pehle he raaste ko chod diye...
hey this sounds like it has been inspired by my story
cool
y not dude.. teri story bhi kamm inspirational thodi hai
amazing stuff yaar..
mujhe nahi pata tha tu itni romanchic poems bhi likhti hai..
n haan thanx coz im copyin this one...
keep up the good works..
ill need many more of those [:P]
thankz for the compliment yaar tujhse bahut kam milte hain...[;)] n tu janta he kahan hai yaar apni dost ko...
chal yaar tu bhi kya yaad rakhega pata le yaar meri taraf gift hai tujhe hehehe
u r in love.....
after reading this poem i came to this conclusion....
mind blowing...
this poem express d depth of a relation...
nopes iam not in luv
but thanks for acknowledging my work..
n yea i cudnt believe that i have been able to reach the vicinity of knowing wat luv is... so your appreciation has really come as a reward
even though i hate romantic works... but still this one had me into it till the end... just two words "too good"
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