Last night I saw someone in my dreams,
Whose presence can be felt in the morning breeze...
I felt someone was gazing at me,
But he wasn't infront of me...
He was someone with whom I have been from the very beginning,
from morning to evening...
He is someone with whom I have shared my feelings,
and received his healings...
He was there when I was alone,
and wanted someone known...
He was with me in my difficult times,
When my life was bitter like lemon n' lime...
From him I wished everything n' anything,
And he gently fulfilled what I wished...
His presence although unquestioned,
His figure still misty,
But he can't be forgotten...
As he took my sorrows,
And gave me happiness,
He was the one who took my tears,
And gave me smile...
Yes... although his figure mystic,
His presence remains UNQUESTIONED...!!
20 comments:
yaar whozz dis 'he'???
hmmmm... this 'he' is still anonymous... its the one whom iam still searching n luking for.. n in short he is the spl someone... who's existence i can't deny but yea.. i still dont know who "HE" is...
heheheheh trust me he is gona stay annoymous fr a very long time
hehehe well lagta toh mujhe bhi yahi hai... but hoping for the best.. letz see may b...[;)]
hmmmmmmmm nice creation bt could b more senti if 1've gone thru dis phases in reality........newaz waiting 4 more awesome creation.
thank you manish.. i agree it would b having more senti if i had faced it in reality... thankz again for the appreciation n yea for doing my work also...hehehe hope i didnt troubled u much
nopes yaar trouble kaisa ......bachpan se aadat hai
aadat hai kis cheez ki?
??
ahhh
i thought i can post my comment here... did'nt know this is a chat room !!!
hmmm.. bro well this is sort of..[;)]
hmmm....
interesting poetry,
good anonymity,
awesome figure of speech,
great imagery,
well i should say cool work!!
thankzz maggie for appreciating my work[:)]
well nyc approach ,
appraised ..
but create more fictions that wud make it more enticing ..hope u knw d person posting the comment ..
luvrr u ..
yup i surely know the person who has posted the comment, after its impossible to forget you and i will try to create more fictions n thanks
very emotional poem.... this poem made me lost behind the lines of the poem.... gr8 n appreciable work.....
well!!!!!!! i think i know ur sumone spl........am i right?????
ahem ahem.... aishu.. when there's no one then about whom are you talking... i dont know
yes aishu u r absolutely right .
sahi jaa rahe ho..
you deserve appaluse... you gave this Mr. Anonymous his existence.. that really is a great work in itself...
thanks for the appreciation... i didn't thought i would be successful in personifying my imagination
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