Friday, 11 September 2009

An untold plea


The gleam in my eyes,
the happiness in my voice,
are 'coz of the feelings that I hold,
for you & have never told...

with you my world has changed,
their are feelings that i can no more cage,
and there's i plea i wanna make,
do anything but never let my heart break...

You have made me live a dream,
now i have a shoulder to lean,
someone on whom i can truly rely,
& hope that you'll never make me cry and say any lie...

the way talking to you i can spend hours and hours,
and how dreams of U n' I have become ours,
It seems to be god's will,
to grant me such a bliss...

even the silence between us speaks a lot,
this would happen to me i had never thought,
now its only your gentle care i long for,
and your tender love is now all that I lure...

10 comments:

shariq said...

you are exceptionally gifted at creating the look... sincerely its a feel good read

Akanchha Shrivastava said...

thanku iam honoured

Mayank said...

wow... a beautiful poem

Akanchha Shrivastava said...

thank you

Jibran said...

yaar..very heart touching..i do remem a song " Pretty boy"

that was gd..but this is Awesome..

Kudos to u Akanchha....

Akanchha Shrivastava said...

thanks iam highly obliged.

Unknown said...

how romantic...dis poem expresses d feelings of a gal who is madly in love..how did u manage to express dis??

Unknown said...

awesome work sweetiee!

Akanchha Shrivastava said...

thanks a lot sweetie.. u know its the experience of near n' dear one's that help [;)] remember na who inspired me in writing this one?[;)]

Unknown said...

nice one ....
i liked this the best....