Wednesday, 22 April 2009

I wanna be...



I wanna be alone,
Wanna replace myself by my clone,
So, that I can leave this place n' die,
And will have no-one behind me to cry...


I wanna run away,
wanna find some way,
To get things sorted out,
And get myself.. a place in the crowd...

12 comments:

Unknown said...

That's depressing poem..
why did u write this..??
anything wrong??

Akanchha Shrivastava said...

hmmm... it is.
came from within... wrong... not exactly but it's quite difficult n' different to.. leave it

sidz said...

u in sad mood...how its possible......


such a drastic change in mood....

kya ho gaya hai... akanchha....

kuch gadbad hai to batao yaar....

Akanchha Shrivastava said...

nopes kuch khas nahi as life is a roller-coaster ride so ups n' downs do accompany me[:)]

everything's fine... n if not i will surely make it so...[:)]

sidz said...

that's like a positive approach.....

Akanchha Shrivastava said...

hmm exactly wud have to have that in order to live happily[:)]

Mayank said...

well your poems are fascinating and great.they are a bit long but great

Akanchha Shrivastava said...

well thankyou for going through them and appreciating them...

Jibran said...

well,...i can see Emelioration in each n every post wen i 1st read this blog...

whether they r short or long, all of them quite altruistic n fervid...

i wish u never grow Anguish n continue the way u r going...

Akanchha Shrivastava said...

thanks for ur praise iam really delighted

shariq said...

i am sorry but i feel like.. you had a day off... your messege is not clear.. u cannot be alone.. and get a place in the crowd at the same time..but i did like the notion....

Akanchha Shrivastava said...

the only message behind these two phrases was that although one is alone but yet there's a hope that these dark clouds will vanish and all things would be sorted and there wud a place for him/her in this world and we well know, success is the strongest magnet that attracts too many people even those who once laughed at you,that can thus eliminate loneliness that persists in his/her lyf.